Catching up – THE FRISCO FLASH and National Play Conference, also DON’T EAT PAPER! and PRAY WITH A BULLET

I’ve had some life changes (we searched for, found, bought a house, and after some relatively minor repairs, are now filling up with new furniture) that have kept me from updating my website and this blog) for quite a while. So here’s a catch-up…

The most important professional news I’ve had is that my play “THE FRISCO FLASH” made it to semi-finals of the National Playwrights Conference a.k.a. The O’Neill. I’ve never made it to even quarter-finals before (and suspiciously in the past the winners always seemed to be established playwrights but now a blind submission really does seem to be blind. Unfortunately, semi-finalists don’t get mentioned on the website, so here is a screenshot of my email from the O’Neill:

Even though I’ve revised “DON’T EAT PAPER!” into a shorter, tighter screenplay, I’m only submitting to a select group now (like the Nicholl). In the end, I just don’t see these competitions as cost effective. Of of the few that I did submit to, I recently did score a Semi-Finalist rank in 2026 Outstanding Screenplays Feature competition:

Now, to contradict my assertion that most of these script competitions have proved to not be cost effective, the Glendale (CA) International Film Festival, though a small local festival, proved to be an exception to the rule. I highly recommend people submit to it. It’s well run. They communicate. They care about film and their city. They treat the screenwriters with respect. Both the opening party and the awards ceremony included free food and drink that was quite good. Plus of course, there were good screenings and panels that the writers could also attend. I went to one with art directors and set decorators.

The closing ceremony for Glendale was held in a historic building (the Glen Arden Club) where the local Moose (like the Elks, Lions etc) lodge meet among other events.

Mark DeCarlo (who actually has been on TV and won an Emmy) was the host. I won’t say all of his jokes were fresh and funny, but some were and he kept things moving in a professional way, better than any other host at a small festival ceremony.

I don’t love the picture of me, but it shows I was there at least…

Finally, this also goes back to 2025. The script for “PRAY WITH A BULLET” was put into the miscellaneous category for FilmQuest (a well regarded genre festival focusing on horror and sci-fi thus why a thriller didn’t really fit but they clearly liked the script). I include it in this post particularly because it’s one of the coolest official laurels I’ve gotten.

EARLY SUMMER 2025 SCREENPLAY COMPETITION PLACEMENTS

My refresh of my comic action – adventure screenplay “THE LOST TREASURE OF THE MAYANS” won Best Script in that category at the Los Angeles Film & Script Festival.


My comedy “DON’T EAT PAPER!” is a Semi-Finalist at the San Antonio Film Festival (final adjudication at the end of the month); a current Quarter-Finalist at Nashville and a Quarter-Finalist at Stage 32 Romantic Comedy competition. (“LIMPING TOWARDS BABYLON” is a Quarter-Finalist at the latter competition.)




“PRAY WITH A BULLET”

is a SEMI-FINALIST in the 1st Annual Fade In Fellowship.


And finally, my comic short script (adapted from the play of the same name) “A MAN OF NO IMPORTANCE” is a SEMI-FINALIST for Outstanding Shorts….
If you’d like to watch this one, we did a fun zoom reading a few years ago. https://vimeo.com/638389788 It starred Demitra Sealy and Justin Park.

Los Angeles Film & Script Festival Honors 4 Screenplays and 1 Play

The Los Angeles Film & Script Festival named “THE LOST TREASURE OF THE MAYANS” as BEST SCRIPT (Action/Adventure) while giving Honorable Mention to “DON’T EAT PAPER!”, “LIMPING TOWARDS BABYLON” and “PRAY WITH A BULLET” with the stage play “THE FRISCO FLASH” also got an Honorable Mention

https://lafilmandscriptfest.com/LAFSF_Winners.html





FESTIVAL ANGAELICA names 4 full length and 1 short script as Official Selections

Festival Angaelica (based in Pasadena, CA) has named 4 of my full length scripts: “Don’t Eat Paper!”, “Limping Towards Babylon”, “Pray with a Bullet” and “The Lost Treasure of the Mayans” and 1 short screenplay “Hell Hath No Fury (Pi)” as Official Selections.





PRAY WITH A BULLET and HELL HATH NO FURY (PI) at LANEFF

My full length PRAY WITH A BULLET and high concept short script (the devil is the private eye and Eve is the femme fatale) received the Writer Award (essentially Finalists by another name at the 2024 Los Angeles Neo Noir Novel,Film and Script Festival on December 3.

Additionally, I made a short pitch video about the scripts and ‘noir:

“PRAY WITH A BULLET” – 2024 Screenplay Competition Successes

I revised thriller “PRAY WITH A BULLET” and sent it to various screenplay competition. Here are the successes from 2024 so far:

Here’s feedback from a Slamdance reader 1:
“‘Pray with a Bullet’ is a riveting tale, strong in its purposeful tone and vivid writer’s voice. A minor fix to note, the scene ins and outs within this screenplay could be tightened, as could the economy of language given we have some flow and pacing issues. However, this is an easy adjustment with a minor editing pass…. Nonetheless, this is an excellent ride and adventure. Wonderful job.”

Slamdance reader 2″:
“‘Pray with a Bullet’ has really stellar character build and development. It’s clear the writer has a strong understanding of people as a whole and how change in them comes about. The dialogue is relatively strong as well– natural and engaging…. A little bit of revising in act 2 for structure would immediately tighten up this script. Great job!”

Slamdance reader 3:
“In ‘Pray with a Bullet’ we have some excellent character work at play. There are fantastic creative choices as well within the writing; the writer’s voice shines in this screenplay…. This is such a fun ride to embark on as a reader and it’s clear this script is near its final form. Wonderful job!”

– 2024 – Semi-Finalist – 28th Annual Fade In Awards Thriller Competition

– 2024 – Semi-Finalist – Ojai Film Festival

– 2024 – Quarter-Finalist – ScreenCraft Action & Adventure Screenplay Competition

– 2024 – Quarter-Finalist – Table Read My Screenplay

– 2024 – Official Selection – Berlin International Screenplay Festival

“Don’t Eat Paper!” and “Pray with a Bullet” 2023 Acceptances

When I initially finished “Don’t Eat Paper!” in 2023, I began to submit that comedy screenplay to competitions: major, minor and those in-between. I then started to submit my older screenplays to some of these contests simultaneously because I had never submitted to most of them. (Since 2023, I’ve done several re-drafts of paper as the current version is shorter than what I submitted in 2023… ditto, I’ve done polishes on the older scripts too.)

“DON’T EAT PAPER!”

– 2023 Semi-finalist – Final Draft’s Big Break

– 2023 Semi-finalist – Flickers’ Rhode Island International Film Festival

– 2023 Semi-Finalist – Polish International Film Festival

– 2023 – Quarter-Finalist – Wiki World’s Fastest Screenplay Competition

– 2023 – Official Selection – Culver City Film Festival

“PRAY WITH A BULLET:

– 2023 – Quarter-Finalist – Outstanding Screenplays Feature Competition