Additionally “Don’t Eat Paper!” also was a Quarter Finalist with Story Pros.
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is a SEMI-FINALIST in the 1st Annual Fade In Fellowship.
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My full length PRAY WITH A BULLET and high concept short script (the devil is the private eye and Eve is the femme fatale) received the Writer Award (essentially Finalists by another name at the 2024 Los Angeles Neo Noir Novel,Film and Script Festival on December 3.
Additionally, I made a short pitch video about the scripts and ‘noir:
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Here’s feedback from a Slamdance reader 1:
“‘Pray with a Bullet’ is a riveting tale, strong in its purposeful tone and vivid writer’s voice. A minor fix to note, the scene ins and outs within this screenplay could be tightened, as could the economy of language given we have some flow and pacing issues. However, this is an easy adjustment with a minor editing pass…. Nonetheless, this is an excellent ride and adventure. Wonderful job.”
Slamdance reader 2″:
“‘Pray with a Bullet’ has really stellar character build and development. It’s clear the writer has a strong understanding of people as a whole and how change in them comes about. The dialogue is relatively strong as well– natural and engaging…. A little bit of revising in act 2 for structure would immediately tighten up this script. Great job!”
Slamdance reader 3:
“In ‘Pray with a Bullet’ we have some excellent character work at play. There are fantastic creative choices as well within the writing; the writer’s voice shines in this screenplay…. This is such a fun ride to embark on as a reader and it’s clear this script is near its final form. Wonderful job!”
– 2024 – Semi-Finalist – 28th Annual Fade In Awards Thriller Competition
– 2024 – Semi-Finalist – Ojai Film Festival
– 2024 – Quarter-Finalist – ScreenCraft Action & Adventure Screenplay Competition
– 2024 – Quarter-Finalist – Table Read My Screenplay
– 2024 – Official Selection – Berlin International Screenplay Festival
